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  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/13/2014 8:29:00 AM)

    sad and beautiful end of the worID

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  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/13/2014 8:26:00 AM)

    give me some of that lovely Leisure great work

  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/13/2014 5:32:00 AM)

    Dawn Sun lovely sentiments in this poem Nitya, I'm sure your future as a poet is very bright.

  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/6/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    like your poems,10 out of 10 from me, keep going your doing great

The Colour

It is the colour of the sea
when you know storm's coming
And the sailor's won't be able to make it.
And the colour HOPE turns when they don't.

It is the colour of light when it's falling upon you,
The colour of life when it's stumbling through.
It is the colour of night right in the middle
And the colour of sight distorted by diddle.

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