Pijush Biswas

Gold Star - 12,098 Points [Blue Sky/Abbie Clare] (12 July,1988 / Srirampur, Nadia, West Bengal, India)

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  • Seema Devi (10/22/2016 3:48:00 PM)

    Composing a sonnet is very difficult as you have to maintain the prescribed norms.. If you want to wtite a traditional/Italian sonnet the rhyme scheme should be abba abba cedcdcd. If you want to compose a shakespearean sonnet the rhyme scheme should be abab cdcd efef gg. You must remember that there must have 10 syllables in every line of a sonnet. Your poem has violated the norm. So it can be called a sonnet. I have read your poems which are called sonnets by you. Actually they can not be called sonnets as i did not find 10 syllables in each line of your poems. So either maintain the norms or leave writing sonnets. Best of luck.

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Alone, I sat beside a window
In a house, near by human habitation
'Mid the sky flying kites, red and yellow
The battle of kites, and exhibition.
One on a sudden loses the owner
Lads and lasses begin cry, even louder.

'Catch, catch it' shouted they 'and run! '
A soft heart, breaking, began to weep

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