& Poem by angel lockheart

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Rating: 2.6


I don’t think it’s my time to go,
But here I am hanging from a ledge,
My fingers slipping,
My arms loosing their strength,
& if I start to fall,
Will you catch me?

I don’t think it’s my time to go,
But here I am getting pulled under,
My lungs filling with water,
My vision going black,
& if I can’t get out,
Will you pick me up?

I don’t think it’s my time to go,
But here I am a gun to my head,
Someone’s fingers itching to pull the trigger,
My life flashing before me,
& if he’s to powerful for me,
Will you safe me?

I don’t think it’s my time to go,
But if I lose control of the car,
My hands not working,
My mind going blank,
& if I start to crash,
Will you pull me back?

I don’t think it’s my time to go,
But if I lose my will to live,
My heart broken,
My soul dead,
& I lose my last hope,
Will you save me from
Myself?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

very honest questoins of a love, good write beauty, i like it.

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Aijaz Asif 18 September 2008

nicely written lvely to read....thanks

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Ramesh Rai 08 April 2012

it is time for you to compose more and more poems. this poem is really outstanding. you are deserving 100 -100% points. best job. you are always safe

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Sonali Sings 21 November 2011

Fear n awareness of untimely death, still an expectation from some one to hold on n save when you lose your everything..thought provoking n nice write..

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Claudia Krizay 28 October 2011

I hope that writing this poem saved you from yourself- well done.

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Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. 01 September 2011

i like the rhythm of this poem, beautiful.

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Kyle Jones 23 August 2009

I'm beginning to see the recurring theme of remorse and heartache, while it is indeed a timeless theme to set a poem, it makes an even better way to ascertain the values and personal truths of the writer in question. in short the poem can help define the writer Deep, dark, original, fantastic in everyway

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