? ? ? Poem by Neha Aradhye

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Whenever i'm doing something,
a few lines of my feelings just happen to me...
So, i pen 'em down,
guess it's a strong weapon i've got with me..........
to express myself to you.....
and to make you realize how much i love you! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !


Then, i see that sweet smile of yours that glows my day.....
and funny lil' things you do, ......route my way! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !


You controlled the network congestion of my life,
and flooded away my sad-sad packets by transmitting me a protocol to jive.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
anurag duggal 25 March 2009

haha SMTP FTP or what lovely write indeed very very casual in approach lovely write indeed Neha

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Asser Mattar 27 April 2009

lovely :) what a lucky network administrator

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 April 2009

Very nice and lovely piece.

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Amit Gokhale 31 March 2009

i would rather call it a tool than a weapon, as yes it could be a weapon when you want shower your anger on someone. But yes it can also be a Breeze, a Fan of care, and a warm and loveing hand when comes to the feelings of love and friedship. The best thing i liked is the true feeling, and the passion to express the fact that the one you wrote this poem for is the precious person in the world.

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Dhanesh Aradhye 29 March 2009

Loved this line: 'Then, i see that sweet smile of yours that glows my day..... and funny lil' things you do, ......route my way' awesome write...

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Vinod Ak 28 March 2009

Superb piece! The power of spontaneity is indeed noteworthy!

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Neha Aradhye

Neha Aradhye

India, Pune
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