? Poem by Kieran J1996

?

Rating: 2.2


When the sky is falling in,
And all hope is growing thin,
I will be ther for you,
For i love you, i truly do,
Your heart is golden pure,
Of that i am sure,
So i ask you now, with me please stay,
Will you marry me on this day?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Whispering Rose 20 May 2010

nicely set, short and conveys the meaning...i like it

0 0 Reply
Katherine Shaw 06 August 2010

Short but sweet x I have posted more poems, please read when you have time, thanks

0 0 Reply
Celiene Watts 30 July 2010

this is so sweet and yet so short, but its really touching and a lot of people will understand and feel this way, including me (:

0 0 Reply
The Lost.. 14 June 2010

OHHHHH it's wonderful.., i liked it so much it really touched me.

0 0 Reply
Elias Barcelona 24 May 2010

its very nice, short and sweet

0 0 Reply
zeo little bird 20 May 2010

awwww that is so cute

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success