! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
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Eternity of ocean is what by tide and ebb
rave of mystery dissipates waves in between
path absolute is cycle of crest and trough
razzles are rungs of color along the course
haste inebriates beholding rise of resonance
sky looks emblazoned by grace of moon
illusion overwhelms by mirth in obsession
quest redounds to joy by glory of knowns
stillness still suffers being restless lone
lurid decadence muffles by sunken flow
sobriety of stance rides over deep longing
hope ravishes by speckling whites to blue
A compelling and creative write. Well done my friend!
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 8:20:01 AM # 1.0.0.1119
You use good descriptive words, although they do not give understanding of what you're saying. Incomplete sentences makes it's meaning undecipherable to me. Expressions of ocean, moon, stillness are not clear to me. I think with just a little rewriting this poem will be perfect. Thank you for sharing. Will read more of your poetry as I am able. RoseAnn