(017) Kites Flying At The Beach Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(017) Kites Flying At The Beach

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There the kites come
Head grasped in the children’s hands
Looking for wind
While their tails get tickled by sand
Ah, there comes the wind
And the kites soar into the sky
The children let out more rope
To see the kites go high high high
They flew hither and thither
Twisting their long necks
The passing by birds
Gave them loving pecks
They swished their magnificent tails
Hugging each other again and again
They danced to the beat of the wind
Even when started had the rain
Later they stopped playing
The sea was crashing, forming foam
As a child said to the others
“We’ve played enough, lets go home”.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francis Duggan 21 January 2008

Such a clever poem this Risha for one so young you are a brilliant writer 10 out of 10 for this excellent poem

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Vijju 14 January 2021

Superb! ! ! !

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Giselle 03 December 2020

Its very well done poem😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💓

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????? 03 December 2020

Not really bad

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Unknown 01 December 2020

Love it😻😻😻😻😻

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Sarah Abdullah 16 April 2008

Lovely the way you described the Kites is Great Thx for sharing ^_^

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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