Akhil H Kumar


02 Night Sky - Poem by Akhil H Kumar

A sky in night is a mixture
of happiness and sorrows.
We feel its texture
as our debt and borrows

Moon is our guide towards success
and Sun Is the path of success
Work hard in light,
to get reward in night.


Comments about 02 Night Sky by Akhil H Kumar

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (9/11/2008 9:25:00 AM)

    'Moon is our guide towards success
    and Sun Is the path of success
    Work hard in light,
    to get reward in night.' Very nice. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Richa Dhodi (5/8/2008 11:16:00 AM)

    hello boy
    a nicely driven Philosophical slab.
    keep going :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (5/6/2008 9:06:00 AM)

    hi akhil, you're very talented for your age. well, i must say keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Vidi Writes (5/4/2008 11:13:00 AM)

    A well lived day -
    Brings a night,
    Full of fun and joy
    Else it becomes
    A time to grieve.

    Well said in this poem.
    Thank you, young poet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points C.R. Clark (5/3/2008 5:53:00 PM)

    A very nice write, my friend. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you
    C R Clark (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Haiku Mitchell (5/3/2008 4:00:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. Very interesting. I loved the last two lines. Good Work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Akhil H Kumar (5/2/2008 11:38:00 AM)

    Very good.good feel & nice imagination. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, May 2, 2008


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