03/22/2008 Shattered ♥ Poem by Coreena Dejesus

03/22/2008 Shattered ♥

Rating: 4.5


Like mishandled window dropped it broke,
Like pieces of glass it went in all directions,
Million of little pieces spread on the floor,
You walked over it cracking every piece,
Tracking it everywhere marking it,
The smudges, it originally only had minor flaws,
Now it's in pieces, like a puzzle,
A mess pieces are missing,
It's no longer whole can't be fixed
Every piece picked up notice more missing,
It will never be complete
I try to arrange the pieces
But the smallest pieces are gone
Like a broken window it won't be fixed.
It's my heart it's broken and you took pieces.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Craig Anderson 23 March 2008

Ooo stabbed! ' Like a broken window it won't be fixed. It's my heart it's broken and you took pieces. ' Glad it's not me your writing about. However I am a gentleman and would never break a lady's heart. Twas a pleasure to read Coreena. Really enjoyed the sting at the end though. Regards. Craig.

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Priyanka Shetty 22 March 2008

really nice........... i loved it.......

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Coreena Dejesus

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