[03] Grief Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

[03] Grief

Rating: 4.3


When the kites fly in the sky
Like lovely tall ladies
A dark cloud extends
To the north-west horizon

Unseen aroma of pollen
Still spreads desire like magician
Exists like happiness
Without length width or height

But grief cuts heart
With a silent scissor
As soft like marmalade
As sour as tamarind

Is the grief final
As the death
For one and all
For living and non-livings




Poem 07
Book 'Affluent Love- The Silent Killer' February 2012
Copyright Writer
Adarsha Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 978-984-8875-33-9

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Starseven0 Starseven0 02 April 2009

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Raj Arumugam 05 May 2009

original turn of phrase and imagery is unique

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Mona Martinez 09 May 2009

now there is a poem i can relate to. every word was so meaningful but, true. :)

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 May 2009

sadl true, well written

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Bob Blackwell 19 May 2009

A lovely flowing poem, it is sad b ut has a beauty of its own. Grief is something we all experience, but it is how we handle it and for how long that determines its outcome. Happy memories and no attachment is the best.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 January 2016

But grief cuts heart With a silent scissor As soft like marmalade As sour as tamarind.. grief, death, kites, ladies........ so many thoughts in such a short poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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Js Black 16 September 2009

Terrific insight...keep up the good work...Jeff.

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Beauty Philosophy 29 August 2009

A very beautiful poem, well -penned and well- thought of. Interesting philosophical questions to raise too, whether grief is final and fatal or not...I think grief is unescapable yet we can overcome it if we search deep inside for strength and if we excavate our hearts to search for the precious moments of joy and bring them to the surface...

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Priyanka Bhowmick 21 June 2009

lovely scripted... 'grief cuts heart.. like a silent scissor'.. wonderful...10++++.

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Claire Hastie 16 June 2009

I can clearly see why your poems are in the top 500. Well done, you deserve it as your words are pure poetry!

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