(087) The Old Wooden Swing Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(087) The Old Wooden Swing

Rating: 5.0


The old wooden swing
It bring back memories of the past
I always sat on it clutching the ropes tight
And watch the sky so vast
When I was small and wanted to rest
I snuggled into the swing deep
Then I sing a lullaby to myself
And in no time I fall asleep
The old swing gave our living room
A nice and elegant touch
When I was small, in my little hands
The rope of the swing I’d clutch
As I sit in the swing
Back and forth my parents pushed me
But they did it slowly when I yawn
Because they knew I was feeling sleepy
Oh, how I miss the old swing
As it’s not with me today
Right now I am watching
The garbage truck carries it far away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramachandran Anilkumar 10 September 2007

dear angel you don't miss that lullaby...it is inborn in you..and it will last through ages..for the enjoyment of your readers like me..uncle

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x... x... 04 September 2007

Oh, I remember those baby swings...my daughter managed to get out of it, [not a good thing] and her brother, well he was just born too big. This is a wonderful poem...The kids swing sets over here now are all wood with Little club houses on top and sand box underneath, and a rope to climb. Kind of nifty. You are a good writer little lady. marci.xo [I'm speaking of the outdoor ones, not the baby ones]

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 04 September 2007

That's cute, it's exactly how I was with my old childhood toys. Don't worry though, you'll get new toys and stuff. Great poem though. Keep writing: -)

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David Harris 04 September 2007

Risha, ahhhh, poor old wooden swing. I remember when I was small I had a swing in our back garden. I would sit on it for hours dreaming away my day. now I'm an old man and wish I had one again so I could look up at the clouds and drift a million miles away. Thanks for awakening some lovely memories. Top marks and thanks for sharing this little Princess. David

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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