#1 Poem by Akhila Viswambharan

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Rating: 2.5


I know, I must leave,
I know, it ain’t right,
But you know,
I’m not ready for this.

You look me in the eye,
Tell me you don’t love me,
And then I’ll leave,
Leave you all alone.

I know, you don’t know,
You know, we messed it up,
But I know,
You ain’t ready for this.

You come in, free my soul,
Lift me up n make me smile,
And then I cry,
Cry for you alone.

I know, there’s lots to say,
I know, its not the end,
But we know,
We’re just not ready for this.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dead Leaf 01 December 2011

Well penned Akhila....true emotion...... pain of losing someone is more than that of anything

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Kesav Easwaran 30 April 2009

the sentiments in losing a relation are well expressed...good write, Akhila...10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 April 2009

Oh i will suggest title for your poem..............Dont Say Goodbye Ever(Kabhi Alvida na Kahena) ............. Good write.......

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