leonard daranjo

(1) Another Dawn - A Vignette - Poem by leonard daranjo

After a night of incessant rain,
The dawn strolled in,
Splintering the Eastern sky
Into jagged streaks of light
Like lava flowing through
Volcanic fissures

Comments about (1) Another Dawn - A Vignette by leonard daranjo

  • Rookie Anilkumar A K (5/4/2008 3:25:00 AM)

    Very nice poem. Enjoyed it very much. Take a look at Athul and Akhil who are young poets. But their poems are super. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ivor Hogg (2/28/2008 7:48:00 AM)

    Brief but power packed with imagery (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (11/24/2007 2:10:00 PM)

    I am looking at your beautiful Eastern dawn. You are a superb word artist. Write on, my poet friend,

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (8/31/2007 9:02:00 PM)

    The image is superb (particularly 'the dawn strolled in') , but the last line is superfluous (in my humble opinion) . You write very well. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 17, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 29, 2011

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