! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1***eternity On Milieu***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1***eternity On Milieu***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
gleams impregnable of fortress by heaven
yet glimmer through wings of immortality
as time and space in its mute undertone
smack of golden dusts raving over rays
distinction loses grace sucked in sweetness
green never ruffles insisting upon precision
yet eternity seals on its skin in ages and eons
perfection never meander being befuddled on window
as red simulates oblong on buoyant path of warmth
passion sates by beauty unflinching yet unfazed
truth dissipates illusion from miffed up mystery
crystals of transcendence beckon to glory of heaven
trust inflammable glows over dazzles of resplendence
as hued blue somersaults into thrills of ocean
dappled spumes resolute to hem in vale of tunes
love assimilates on the Elysian bay in unison
as when flattered on the altar of endearment
dream seems to redeems on virile pages of history
true soul bedecks of resilience by throes of breath
as ripples flow in solitude by buoyancy of intonation
yet mellifluous melody intones in assonance
beating of moment reels through speckles of red
beauty of truth blazes glory of Promethean fire
belief slowly beatifies in streams of penitence
love of innocence reels up in transcendence
It's really different Shubhendu.... Very nice thought and well described... :)
wonderful poem and impressive it. you turn to give my poem....
Hi, I would have loved to place an impressive comment but truth be told i had to get a dictionary for this one...Keep writing though, for those who understand your work salute you, as long as you can touch just a single soul...than your work is truly amazing.I 'm a simple writer and those who can follow the concept of my work, i say let them follow...We can sing at the same time, but not talk at the same time.I suppose the same thing goes with poetry....keep writting...keep inspiring.
This poem has deepness. The flavor of beauty is mingled with knowledge of expression. I appreciate the last two lines as more than simple words. 'belief slowly beatifies in streams of penitence love of innocence reels up in transcendence' The greatest sweetness of life is that which is eternal. The Lord Creator, who gave his son's life for our sake, honors belief with true repentance and innocence he does not despise. These words bring glory to him.
The speaker seems to emphasise on the beauty of the sunlight across the sky. It is beautifully written.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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From : Alakesh Kalita (India ;) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/20/2010 2: 38: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Through the filters of intellectuality you enter the heart, truly. Most people have a simpler heart that might deny to treasure such a complex nectar. But what a poet like you actually do is to expand the power of language to think with. That is how a poet like you contribute and that is truly valuable.There lies the point for the poet as to how he would define his technique and standpoint in connection to their intention, that is, how they would like to contribute. I feel you have chosen that correctly, on reading this poem 'eternity on milieu'. But some poets confuse, they connect the wrong technique with the wrong intention and come up with a blurred picture. A poet aspiring to be a poet of the mass (his standpoint would tell whether he aspires or not) must be careful with the voice and effects he produces and INTELLECTUAL modern poetry is as concious as to that limit, if it is not, it should be and that is when it by any means invites the intellectual filters.Most modern poetry apply to chords in the heart after just a little tinkering with brain tissues, that poetry touches almost before it is understood - that is a different thing altogether. I do not garner any criminal aspirations for belittling poets with my sly comments as some might think. I only comment (honestly) on what has the order and fluency to enter my little head nicely. But that does not refer to my not leaving a comment for you in the comment area of your poem page. This letter I hope you will take to be more than a comment. I wish to get a reply from you just to make myself sure that you have taken me in good faith. Thanking you for considering me to be worthy enough of rating such type of poetry as yours- Alakesh.