leonard daranjo


(1) Lightening - Poem by leonard daranjo

Pencilling its way
Across an indigo sky,
Spider web lacerations,
Paint the earth
Incandescent


Comments about (1) Lightening by leonard daranjo

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (6/6/2009 9:04:00 PM)

    Your words etch the image of your subject into the reader's mind and leave her thinking: 'I wish I'd said that'. Articulate, graceful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ivor Hogg (2/28/2008 7:49:00 AM)

    Induced a strong visual of forked lightning displaying its power (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Indira Babbellapati (9/17/2007 4:31:00 AM)

    i almost saw it...i mean the lightning painting the earth! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Firoze Shakir Bollywoods Most Wanted Poet Of India (9/15/2007 1:39:00 PM)

    marvellous play on worlds pencilling the very word of earthly man woman reproductivity and birth of a crying poem...10 on target leonard (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 15, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 9, 2011


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