(Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak - Land with Cat City, Swan City, Oil City and the World's Largest Cave Mulu)

1. Two Red Candles Burning Through Night

chinese wedding
two red candles burn
though the night
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  • Wyndon Villafuerte (7/7/2009 2:38:00 AM)

    I agree with the previous comment. It's a very unique poem and I love your choice in words. It's a very sensual and beautiful poem. This is definitely going in my favorites...

    By the way, I see you also write haiku. I invite you to read some of mine. I hope you like them.

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  • Shelley L Baxter-Stanley (5/29/2007 8:59:00 PM)

    Very original and different thinking to comment on such a thing...Great imagery and beauty in your words! I love how it overlaaps with other feelings and thoughts as you consider and think about two red candles.
    A thought provoking piece that is well written and interesting......Great JOb John.
    =Shelley=

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  • Jamal Ludin (4/8/2007 12:05:00 PM)

    what a structure -i want to imitate one -beautiful

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