10,000 Years For Each Earth Citizen Poem by john tiong chunghoo

10,000 Years For Each Earth Citizen

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the earth has enough years
to give every of its citizens
10,000 years or more
to live alone on the planet

and as many more years
left over for every animal to enjoy
the whole planet on its own

the earth is a kind old man
lost in arithmetics
with too many of its citizens
lost in impatience

they squeeze the earth
into a little time box
suffocate it with inventions
and willingly lead it
down the road of destructions

the earth has enough years
to give every of its citizens
10,000 years or more
to live alone on the planet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 28 December 2006

So take time to smell the roses! It seems everything is going faster and faster with each passing year. Maybe the earth has time, but man is on a tight schedule, and anxious to cram it all into a few years of existence, just in case our time is shorter than we think. Thought-provoking write, John. Linda

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Ivan Donn Carswell 28 December 2006

Is living alone a 'choice' - perhaps of necessity, or a rational decision? Interesting arithmetic, my guess is we have less than 10,000 years left. Sadly intropective John, and very thought provoking.

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Raghavan Warrier 09 January 2007

Nice piece John. But me too is in a mad rush. I don't know why?

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Melvina Germain 09 April 2007

Thought provoking to say the least, we should all slow down a bit and as Linda says smell the roses. Wonderful poem John---Melvina---

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Raveendran . 01 April 2008

Fantastic imagination, equitable style

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Vidyadhar ... 01 March 2008

10000 years to live alone in the planet...I like it

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I liked this. I liked the thought behind it. And on some days, I really wouldn't mind a small portion of my 10,000 years.

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Fred Babbin 07 December 2007

Just a litle bit crude, but I read your biography and loved it. It is so poetic.

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Malini Kadir 01 June 2007

we all have all the time on earth......if we would but realise it! John I loved this work .``````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````hema

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john tiong chunghoo

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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