A haunting poem, long after you have gone through it. Calling back again and again. Ordinary words, but extraordinary poetry.
It just as Rabindranath Tagore wrote:
That words have meanings is just the difficulty. That is why the poet has to turn ans twist them in meter and verse, so that the meaning may be held some what in check and the feeling allowed a chance to express itself.
Yes, Lawrence, you have achieved a free flow of feelings. Much above the meanings and words. That is what poetry really is. Excellent. Congrats. Keep writing.
Perhaps a haiku would go like this:
Should have complained,
Why didn't I complain.
We have to stop believing the BS and start standing up to these corporations and their pupets in our Governments.-10