Learn More

David Knox

Rookie - 10 Points (honestly why would i tell you? / does it matter?)

10 lines


How can i profess my love for you in just ten lines
when i could write a million rhymes
how can i say all that i feel
in so little space, i must fill the world with my love
It's hard to believe, but what i am saying is truth,
but i want to write my love for you everywhere yet protect it as a precious dove

in only ten lines how can i make you see
all the love I've bottled, inside of me
waiting to spill out all over you
hoping that you love me too...

Submitted: Tuesday, April 22, 2008

Do you like this poem?
1 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (10 lines by David Knox )

Enter the verification code :

  • Rookie Kye Kurion (4/22/2008 11:56:00 PM)

    Although very little of that actually described something, it was a good poem. (Report) Reply

Read all 1 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. Alone And Drinking Under The Moon, Li Po
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night, Dylan Thomas
  4. A Child's Christmas in Wales, Dylan Thomas
  5. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  6. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
  7. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  8. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  9. Nothing Gold Can Stay, Robert Frost
  10. Invictus, William Ernest Henley

Poem of the Day

poet Li Po

Amongst the flowers I
am alone with my pot of wine
drinking by myself; then lifting
my cup I asked the moon
to drink with me, its reflection
and mine in the wine cup, just
...... Read complete »

   

Member Poem

poet Marvin Brato Sr

New Poems

  1. Fresh Threats, Lawrence S. Pertillar
  2. Using everything, gajanan mishra
  3. For You To Keep Deep, Lawrence S. Pertillar
  4. I am Hades Sweet Persephone, Tiger Auntunette
  5. Wisdom And Knowledge, RoseAnn V. Shawiak
  6. Child Slaughter, douglas scotney
  7. A slave to situation,, Aftab Alam
  8. Arctic Hero?, Denis Martindale
  9. The fate, gajanan mishra
  10. Five Cherry Blossoms To Despair., Martin Engstrom
[Hata Bildir]