David Knox

Rookie - 50 Points (honestly why would i tell you? / does it matter?)

10 Lines - Poem by David Knox

How can i profess my love for you in just ten lines
when i could write a million rhymes
how can i say all that i feel
in so little space, i must fill the world with my love
It's hard to believe, but what i am saying is truth,
but i want to write my love for you everywhere yet protect it as a precious dove

in only ten lines how can i make you see
all the love I've bottled, inside of me
waiting to spill out all over you
hoping that you love me too...

Comments about 10 Lines by David Knox

  • Rookie Kye Kurion (4/22/2008 11:56:00 PM)

    Although very little of that actually described something, it was a good poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 22, 2008

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