10 Weeks Ago! Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

10 Weeks Ago!

Rating: 4.3


Today is 10 weeks ago and,
I am still waiting for her call;
For, she left me without a note!
It is just like when a boy loves a girl,
In the land of beautiful roses.

10 weeks ago,
And, i am still waiting for her letter;
And, it is just like when a girl loves a boy!
In the land of beautiful roses,
With true love, mercy and concern.

10 weeks agao!
Like the muse of the king and the prince
Living in the garden of love;
But, nature had now left me alone in the bush,
With the sun shining on me alone.

Love,
With the muse of an echo heard from afar!
But, she left me without a note;
Life,
The rain will surely fall one day! !
To quench my thirst in the forest.

Tuesday, April 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 05 June 2020

Stil waiting for her call! ! ! Loneliness, The rain will surely fall one day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2020

Echoes of love from afar! ! Still waiting. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always in your land.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 February 2020

What thrill is there if there isn't a minute grain of salt in a sweet ice cream life? Sad lines bring hope, solace in the end. Nice poem 10+

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Anne Velevski 03 March 2017

I like how you started...keep up the momentum though...very good I like it very much.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2016

Oh, So Heart Touching! ! ! Beautifully Written! ! ! You're A Very Talented Writer! ! ! Thank You Very Much For Sharing! ! ! 10s! ! !

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