Allie Whitehead

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10 Years - Poem by Allie Whitehead

A friendship won,
A friendship lost,
A friendship full of love and trust,
A friendship gone,
A friendship there,
A friendship that,
We will always share


Comments about 10 Years by Allie Whitehead

  • Rookie - 0 Points Elisa Debot (6/18/2013 5:02:00 PM)

    very good poem. it's very touching and it feels very real. (Report) Reply

    4 person liked.
    2 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 0 Points Elisa Debot (6/18/2013 4:47:00 PM)

    really well written and emotional. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Karen Gonzalez-videla (6/14/2013 1:41:00 PM)

    I like how the few words you wrote make a beautiful connection to friendship. However, I personally believe that you should make a connection to the title in the poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Faduma Muhammed (11/12/2012 9:46:00 PM)

    Totally enjoyed this piece! So meaningful. Great Job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 364 Points Sina Farajzadeh (8/1/2012 12:42:00 AM)

    Oh dear friend. A friendship is good when it is real and mutual. Continue writing.
    Why the title is not related to the text of poem? Do you have a friendship with someone special for ten years? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 263 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (7/28/2012 11:33:00 PM)

    short but meaningful. i can feel the condition of the poet. great!
    well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, July 27, 2012


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