1000 Miles Poem by sandy nobody

1000 Miles



i drove a thousand miles
to visit you
we spent the day together
just us two

i wanted you to see
that i really care for you
i wanted you to feel
the love i have for you

when was time for me to go
you wanted me to stay
i didnt want to leave
you watched as i drove away

i thought the day was special
hoped you felt the same
but now i feel it was
all just another game

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malini Kadir 26 March 2008

love this truth of nature, casual the fires of man...put in simple relativity.....beautifully!

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Jim Foulk 15 December 2006

LOVE WHAT WOULD WE DO WITHOUT IT, NO POEMS WOULD BE WROTE. ANOTHER NICE POEM YOU WROTE

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Corey Russell 22 November 2006

wow...i can totally relate to this, great job!

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