Shaun Shane

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11 Drowning In A Waterfall - Poem by Shaun Shane

drowning in
a waterfall
you'd think
that i
might try

to stop
myself
from drowning

but i thought
why should i

try to
stop from
drowning
when right
here i
could just
lie

and breathe
in all
this water

and pass
away and
die


Comments about 11 Drowning In A Waterfall by Shaun Shane

  • Freshman - 646 Points Maya Hanson (2/20/2014 4:31:00 PM)

    I love this...so sad but flowing and beautiful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 24, 2014


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