(116) You-Know-Who Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(116) You-Know-Who

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Noisier than the noisiest trumpet
More restless than the sea
Naughtier than the wind playing tricks
Who is this now, let me see
More annoying than a mosquito
Lazier than the never moving tree
More impatient than anyone you know
I think that will be me.

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A fine piece of literary work, young lady, with a powerful message strapped definely within its text...Suffice to say, that if you take the mantra, that you express here, through your life....that, an accomplished, & content woman you shall be! Nicely done, Risha. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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