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16 at war

um 16 at war
16 at war with life
16 at war with destiny
16 at war with the universe
16 at war with the world
16 at war in iraq
16 at war with my soul
16 at war with my spirit
16 at war with teenage ways
16 at war with you
16 at war with whom?

Submitted: Wednesday, June 04, 2008


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  • Matthew Thompson (3/6/2009 7:27:00 PM)

    Not evreyone has the gift.
    Sorry

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  • Sarah Mustang (8/10/2008 3:14:00 AM)

    Very simply written yet insightful poem.

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