18 Poem by Krystal ...

18

Rating: 2.8


I see you there getting another year older
It’s your 18th birthday
I see your future it’s bright

Your sky is open and full of life
Another year goes by
I see you grow so fast

I am who I want to be
I see you as my mentor, leading me in all the right directions
My sky is open and full of life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Burger 19 October 2011

I like this poem. It is a very free piece of writing and it is very enjoyable

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Jake Shelvey 26 March 2010

Really good and full of potential, which perfectly portrays yourself

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