196.Chasing The Ideal Poem by rajagopal haran

196.Chasing The Ideal

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Trying to be a star
With all the glitter
Nothing in the vicinity
Like a foetus in a lab flask
To share my heart!
Wandered alone
Trying to float among the clouds
Beside the cliff touching the sky
Beneath the banyan trees
Dancing in the gentle air
Moving over the ocean
Tossing the waves
Crossed the graveyard
The asylum for Solitude
Finding no soul
Moved on to my bed
Reflecting inside my eyelids
Realized the bliss!

12.04.2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhil H Kumar 04 May 2008

Very nice poem.Liked it very much.Take a look at Athul who is ten.His poems are super!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 12 April 2008

It is really difficult task to chase the ideal, which always tries to slip away from our hands, due to temptations helping it to slip. To become a role model is not that much easy as one may think. This is my personal experience also, in fact.

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Tiruchirapalli-Tamilnadu-India
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