Treasure Island

Edward Kofi Louis

(13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

1st Day And 1st Time


The 1st day of love and the 1st time of a kiss that it brings,
The 1st day of love and the 1st time of romance that it takes,
The 1st day of love and the 1st time of sex moves like war!
But with all the walls around you to smell your roses:
And you were the one that i met on that day.

I have come to love you more than ever,
I have come to learn from you as well;
But the 1st day of your love towards me tasted like,
The war of a sweet love around me!

The 1st day of your passions on the 1st time of your love,
And of the energies that your emotions shared with mine;
But today, you are all that it took on the 1st day of this love.

Submitted: Thursday, December 18, 2008
Edited: Sunday, May 16, 2010

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (1st Day And 1st Time by Edward Kofi Louis )

Enter the verification code :

  • Naidz Ladia (12/23/2008 3:39:00 AM)

    WHATTA A POEM...its very nice....its really nice...i like ths poem...i think i will like all ur poem...first may not be the last but the frst time i read ur poem leads me to read up to the last that u cud make...ur poem is good.. (Report) Reply

Read all 3 comments »

New Poems

  1. Reason, Elia Michael
  2. Autumn again but, Nassy Fesharaki
  3. He Was Leaving, Neela Nath
  4. Symphony, Col Muhamad Khalid Khan
  5. The hunter's trap - By POET Yaser Nadeem.., MOHAMMAD SKATI
  6. As passimist, hasmukh amathalal
  7. As golden, hasmukh amathalal
  8. without warning, with morning, Lucy Gray
  9. How to Pinda-Dana?, Bijay Kant Dubey
  10. We are neighbors, gajanan mishra

Poem of the Day

poet Rupert Brooke

If I should die, think only this of me:
That there's some corner of a foreign field
That is for ever England. There shall be
In that rich earth a richer dust concealed;
...... Read complete »

   

Trending Poems

  1. 04 Tongues Made Of Glass, Shaun Shane
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. 1914 V: The Soldier, Rupert Brooke
  6. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  7. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  8. All the World's a Stage, William Shakespeare
  9. No Man Is An Island, John Donne
  10. Invictus, William Ernest Henley

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]