Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 24,126 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

1st Day And 1st Time - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

The 1st day of love and the 1st time of a kiss that it brings,
The 1st day of love and the 1st time of romance that it takes,
The 1st day of love and the 1st time of sex moves like war!
But with all the walls around you to smell your roses:
And you were the one that i met on that day.

I have come to love you more than ever,
I have come to learn from you as well;
But the 1st day of your love towards me tasted like,
The war of a sweet love around me!

The 1st day of your passions on the 1st time of your love,
And of the energies that your emotions shared with mine;
But today, you are all that it took on the 1st day of this love.


Comments about 1st Day And 1st Time by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Rookie - 45 Points Gillena Cox (9/3/2009 12:08:00 AM)

    i like the repetition, its very effective (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (12/23/2008 3:39:00 AM)

    WHATTA A POEM...its very nice....its really nice...i like ths poem...i think i will like all ur poem...first may not be the last but the frst time i read ur poem leads me to read up to the last that u cud make...ur poem is good.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raymond Anyanwu (12/20/2008 9:54:00 AM)

    beautiful, enlightening and soothing sir.
    i cannot conceal my delight with this (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 18, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 16, 2010


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