(2) Armors And Dynamite Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

(2) Armors And Dynamite

Rating: 2.8


I talk to you
through
somebody else´s
poems.

Those would be the words
I wish I could have told you.

Two lives in different dimensions
cross their ways
and write an equation
of feelings and redemption.

Sensitivity and beauty,
armours and dynamite
attract each other.

One same farewell
and two separate paths
to loneliness.

Just enough
to keep writing poems.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 27 July 2009

Two lives in different dimensions cross their ways and write an equation of feelings and redemption. How true and beautiful, the dimensions dissolve and the poetry is born. CP

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 July 2009

'just enough to keep writing poems' beautiful! 10+

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