2010/01/10 The One I Love Poem by Margaret Alice

2010/01/10 The One I Love

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It can only be Olé Guapa that
was played when Bill Door took
Miss Flitworth through the steps
of a tango at the harvest dance

‘The predatory stance, arms clasped
ahead of them like the bowsprit of a
killer galleon, turning in a flurry of limbs
defying normal anatomy before
the angular advance back’*

I danced the tango this morning, trying
that predatory stance, then the sadness
of the long drawn-out violin notes before
the accordion takes up the aggressive
introductory theme again

Castanets rumbling in my head, military
heels clicking, I visualised an eighteen-
year old Renata Flitworth in the diamond-
studded black dress she got from Death,
felt the adrenaline

Dancing a tango with Death who took her
to her young bridegroom so she could be
with him forever, a life well lived, a heart
warm and caring, she offered her lifetime
to save a young girl

Death, delighted, borrowed her time to
defy the rules of the auditors and repaid
her by eternal togetherness – I love this
story, the only worthwhile dream is to be
with the one I love…

Reaper Man – Terry Pratchett, Gollancz,1991
* Quote taken from p.243

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Gale 19 January 2010

Great poem Margaret! God bless those who read or write poetry. May God bless those, who does not-MJG.

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