2010/05/18 Who Adores You Poem by Margaret Alice

2010/05/18 Who Adores You

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Wishing to kiss the pain of another away - as long as
you know I am thinking of you, night and day, offering
you comfort, you may feel fragile when your dreams fall
apart - let it go, let it go, there is a new one, lament the
loss of your first dream as much as you like, cry unto me

I am holding a vision for you, your sweet temperament and
unselfish spirit bring new adventures and friends, your mind
will create a safe place where you can be happy and free
changes are inevitable because all people need to see the
world for themselves, not through your eyes all the time

Accept the affection and love offered to soften the loss of
dreams, remember who adores you, allow yourself to be
held, the only balm to cure all loneliness - rest in the
care of our love, let us enfold you the way we always
wished to while you were so independent before

Formerly you would not let anyone near you, now we shall
storm your citadel to protect you against the pain of self-
doubt, we shall be your breastplate against the sadness
that is stalking you, we shall lead you to beautiful
places where you shall be refreshed and renewed

Nothing more magical required than pure simple love
all yours, take as much as you want, in delight it is
offered as you have brought us so much joy, we
wish to share all wonder and magic with you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 18 May 2010

Nothing more magical required than pure simple love You have told everything dear poet but the problem is, so simple act of showing our manliness can not be practised in our own life due to some small ego. Always we try to enjoy own achievments so passionately, forget all our commitments. Well-written another piece of good work. Very much greedy we are to get such compassion crylingly. But alas.......cruel time is very active to show its glory. Thank you, 10++ Apoet Bangla

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Pretoria - South Africa
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