2012 Poem by David DeSantis

2012

Rating: 5.0


A comet across the sky
or a war within my mind,
A bitter battle fought
or a love come to naught
A movie without an end
Or a sun made to bend
like a glass that refracts
until the pieces are put back.
A hole in the clouds
And an earth that is found
to move its polar pull
reversed 180 full.
Lights in the air
and machines that aren't there
As torrents cloud the sky
and Judgements pass on by
4th dimension space
an enlightened human race
day that is night
and cosmic solar lights
all of this and more
twenty-twelve is at the door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 13 January 2009

A fascinating science fiction ride into tomorrow, written as the two sides of an unresolved argument perhaps? Wonderfully innovative penning. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Onelia Avelar 10 January 2009

David Desantis - a comet across the sky of poemhunter :) It's nice to see you again, blazing. An intriguing poetical oracle here, free for interpretetion, easy flowing...Good work!

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Anita Atina 10 January 2009

Enlightened human race... oh that will be the day! ! ! Good to see you here David.

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