Treasure Island

Bella Ravenstar

(Southern California)

2013


Oh how the wait
I long for it so
I hungry
To behold the savory mysteries
I am young
But mature enough
I have to wait
To be admitted
To further parts
Of the gleaming building
Closer to heaven I'll be
Closer to eternity
2013
On that day
I will receivie it without further wait
Now it's 2008
Yet I long
To be forever young
Forever my age
But I can't wait for 2013
For that day

Submitted: Saturday, June 28, 2008

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  • , aryaindia (7/21/2008 8:12:00 PM)

    Perhaps you will be a major on that day, or is that your wedding day? or the day of graduating....no one knows............but it is with fervent desire that all of us wait for some day in the future. For me, it is the day when I shall step into my soul's divine acceptance to immortality. Thanks for sharing. arya (Report) Reply

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