21 Poem by khalid alalawi

21

Rating: 3.0


We are now away from each other
and We're getting farther, as We getting old

It's your 21 birthday
Your heart was like sky
Open for me in anytime

I used to be your 20 stars and now
Am nothing more than who I am
Lonely star, which has come up from the sky.

Some told me
Your heart is open for anyone
But it was closed front of me

I saw you in your 21 getting more shine
You shine like a star, but a soon I see
Your heart's talking about your past

In this year nothing I could wish
Nothing I could ask more, I wish to be,
With you forever.

This is your 21 so tell me
how would my look like

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 16 February 2012

That was a bright shine star...21 years of a newly born star...wish you become a megastar who never afraid in dark universe! ! nice write.._Unwritten Soul

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J Lopez 27 April 2011

That's deep dude I like it.

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