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My verse cannot completely trace a fair reflection who's soft light underscores such endless grace. Dream words, found wanting, seek insight. Eternal beauty, spirit bright, must judge each base line inks disgrace as none compare! What second sight unties knot, satisfies both pace, due praise, phrased paean, may replace English deficient, narrow, quite coarse, inadequate. One face could stand time's envy, jealous spite.
Yet, reading this, who will believe there’s no intention to deceive?
© Jonathan Robin & Maude Corrieras – Poem written 25 August 1991 and 18 May 2005 retitled and revised as acrostic sonnet Maude C 8 June 2008
Incompleteness
Verse cannot completely trace one fair reflection where the light leaves an impression of such grace that words, found wanting, seek insight to reunite with spirit bright – yet every line links to disgrace when compared, when second sight seeks to satisfy both pace and sense of fitness which replace the commonplace that must indict the great part of the human race – read here both truth and envy’s spite.
Yet who’ll, on reading this, believe here’s no intention to deceive?
© Jonathan Robin – Poem written 25 August 1991 and 18 May 2005
Jonathan ROBIN
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