3 Mice On The Tin Roof Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

3 Mice On The Tin Roof

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3 mice on the tin roof
though their minds were on food
an impulsive id drove them
they swung to different mood!

I warned myself here no poetry
no story to make out of it
let them have in privacy
a good time bitterly sweet!

3 mice on the tin roof
swayed by their id
I should have stayed aloof
and not watched them in greed!

I told me there’s no poem
in the 3 mice and their id
leave them alone with their game
but my greed paid it no heed!

It’s not civil not nice
to act a peeping Tom
see furtively the 3 mice
breaching all courteous norms!

3 mice on the tin roof
to me I had this to say
go your way stay aloof
and not venture on their way!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 September 2014

Cute and lovely mice on the tin roof looking for the food so beautifully composed......Pradipji.......I loved it

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Adeline Foster 17 January 2014

Ah, Three Blind Mice to be sure. So cute and fun. Read mine - Brier Fever - Adeline

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