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(28.01.1961 / Kolkata)

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3 Mice On The Tin Roof

3 mice on the tin roof
though their minds were on food
an impulsive id drove them
they swung to different mood!

I warned myself here no poetry
no story to make out of it
let them have in privacy
a good time bitterly sweet!

3 mice on the tin roof
swayed by their id
I should have stayed aloof
and not watched them in greed!

I told me there’s no poem
in the 3 mice and their id
leave them alone with their game
but my greed paid it no heed!

It’s not civil not nice
to act a peeping Tom
see furtively the 3 mice
breaching all courteous norms!

3 mice on the tin roof
to me I had this to say
go your way stay aloof
and not venture on their way!

Submitted: Wednesday, November 06, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, November 06, 2013


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  • Adeline Foster (1/17/2014 4:25:00 PM)

    Ah, Three Blind Mice to be sure. So cute and fun. Read mine - Brier Fever -
    Adeline

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