30 Year Old Line Poem by Natasha Edwards

30 Year Old Line

Rating: 5.0


Baby, its cold out side
Why don't you stay and make a memory
with me

Let's make love
Let's just breathe in and out
No words needed
Just reach for me
Lets make a memory

Just for tonight
Holding each other tight
Forgetting the reasons
Why we find it so easy to fight

Make love to me
Soft and true
Breathe in me
Till we are no longer two

Baby, the world is cold outside
Stay and make a memory
To a new melody
Just you and me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 07 February 2009

I liked the wonderful rhythm of this quite appealing poem, Natasha, as well as how beautifully you phrased this poem. Expressive poems like this are not easy to get just right, but you succeeded extremely well in this fine write. Carl.

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