Laura Milner

Rookie - 61 Points (16.04.93 / Manchester)

3pm - Poem by Laura Milner

Though woken by incandescent light
I pry open my eyes
and struggle to hide the shadows beneath.

A slight twinge in the spine.
My love, unaware of time.
The day has passed
though I show no remorse

Let us repeat!


Comments about 3pm by Laura Milner

  • Gold Star - 34,112 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/11/2013 8:57:00 PM)

    My love, unaware of time. good write.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, November 15, 2013


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