(607) Caught In The Act Poem by Melvina Germain
(607) Caught In The Act
You took me by surprise, when you picked me up.
Massaging my neck with such gentle strokes.
You moved your hands so softly,
Slowly caressing my cool naked body.
You held me close to your chest and kept me,
warm squeezing me oh so gently,
Then placed your tongue on my lips and pressed
lightly against my mouth.
Bent your head back ever so slowly, all the while
holding me tight in your manly strong hands.
enjoying the aroma of my sweet perfume,
You open your eyes, look above and realize,
there’s a camera peering down on you. Now
you’re caught in the act of stealing a most
expensive bottle, of the master’s fine wine.
Written by: August 16/2006
Excellent Melvina. Definitely my style of poem, with that nice 'kick' at the end. Very well done, and a pleasure to read. Nice one. Love Ernestine XXX
love the 'zinger' at the end. sensually endowed with entrancing heat. -Tailor
No wonder you like my composition Melvina, you are also very sensitive and expression in your poems, sensual very romantic and sexy! .. you are best! keep writng!
Loved the sensuality, loved the twist at the end, loved the comments of the fellow poets. Well done!
Another amazing piece! All I can say is WOW! You read it to me before but truly I forgot about it and was amazed at how Amazingly well U wrote such a provocative intrigueing thought provoking piece of poetry. Brilliant Melvina-Brilliant.......Thank U. Please keep up the marvelous work.ten out of 10! ! ! ! Another fave! ! =Shelley=
Melvina, as many of the others have said, excellent poem. I also loved the twist at the end. Take care. TJ P.S. I finally had some free time. :)
Wonderful Melvina, I love the twist in this provocative write. All the best, Diane
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 10:20:53 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This was very funny - a voyeuristic surprise.