782. A Hair In My Porridge! 160309 Poem by Raman Savithiri

782. A Hair In My Porridge! 160309

Rating: 5.0


Is it my carelessness?
Or is it my unluckiness?
Each day when I wish,
To give you my ugly dish,
With a porridge meager,
Mixing love and eager,
Somehow a hair falls in it!
You neglect my ugly kit,
Giving priority to plates silver,
From hands that not quiver,
Holding pongal that entices,
With aroma of ghee untainted!

Is it my unawareness?
Or is it my unworthiness?
Each day when I chant,
Your thousand names great,
In my mind untidy,
Bubble up thoughts worldly!
You neglect my offering repulsive,
Giving priority to minds sportive,
But unwavering aim to win,
Your love eternally divine! 160309

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akram Awadat 16 May 2009

very good poem, well done

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Raman Savithiri

Raman Savithiri

Coimbatore, Tamil Nadu, India
Close
Error Success