(877) Fear Of The Unknown Poem by Melvina Germain

(877) Fear Of The Unknown

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The wind was strong and the dust blew viciously.
Walking on a dirt road, not sure of my destination.
I encountered a coyote standing in the distance. My
first thought was to turn and run and then I
realized that might not be a good idea. I slowly
walked, placing one foot quietly in front of the
other, while keeping my eye on the coyote. The
animal did not move, it stood in the same position.
Fearful as I was, I didn’t want the animal to know
my fear. I bravely took step after step and walked
toward the road. Finally I reached a crossing in
the road. When I turned to look back the coyote
was gone. At that point, I felt sure I was safe and
continued to walk down the road. When I
approached an old shack at the road clearing, I
noticed paw prints on the soft ground. Immediately
I thought, what animal made those prints, surely
it wasn’t the coyote that I encountered earlier,
certainly not, don’t be silly I thought to myself.
Once again I continued to walk forward. I could
feel butterflies in my stomach. What were those
prints on the ground. Trying not to think about it,
I began to walk faster and faster. Suddenly I
heard a noise, it sounded like a scratching noise
behind me. Oh what now, could that be the
coyote. My heart was racing and the sweat
poured down my face causing my eyes to sting.
My vision blurred by my perspiration, I was beside
myself and was feeling very sick to my stomach.
Never before, have I been so afraid, never so unsure
of myself. I wanted to run, but once again
wondered if the animal that was following me
might run and attack me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 21 October 2006

Another fascinating story goes on...............And it's a journey? The unpleasant sensation of wild dogs. And predicts furthermore? The unknown is the cause of fear and the soul never knows the destiny?

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 21 October 2006

YOU'RE TOSSIN' ME CURVEBALLS, YOUNG LADY! ....Two marvelous works, BOTH to be a series? Too good to be true...I have to see more, before I believe it! lol! Another strong penning, Melvina'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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TJ Daniels 13 November 2006

Melvina, I like everyone else MUST read more... Please? ? ? ? ? Loved reading, but NEED MORE! ! ! ! :) I felt like a child going to the movies to see a serial... And you just can't wait til next week to see the end. Take care. TJ

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Geoff Warden 04 November 2006

leavin' me at seats edge here... please tell some more....

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Tailor Bell 28 October 2006

definitely a seat-grabber...where is my popcorn and part 2. it is the unknown that we fear. strong work. -Tailor

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Kee Thampi 26 October 2006

Fearful as I was, I didn’t want the animal to know my fear. I bravely took step after step and walked toward the road. Finally I reached a crossing in the road. When I turned to look back the coyote was gone. At that point, I felt sure I was safe and continued to walk down the road. When I approached you makes new experiment.....like a saw. story means it uttarence...fit for it

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Diane Violet 24 October 2006

Wow, Melvina this is great. I love a series, looking forward to more on the edge of my seat. All the best, Diane

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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