921: Rythm Of Life Poem by Amit Biswas

921: Rythm Of Life

Rating: 5.0


Found love,
Both glad,
Jumped to marry,
Elders angry,

Didn’t bother,
Enjoyed rather,
Became father,
Glad mother,

Life’s hurdles,
Together struggled,
Neat we looked,
Example we became,

Something’s lacking,
Missed the smacking,
I slipped,
All hurt,

Forgiven, recovered
Not as before,
Change remains,
Life goes on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 29 August 2008

One mistake sometimes changes the life, drains the usual pleasures. Very good subject succinctly told in an nice, compact structured poem...my happy 10 sathya narayana

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Amit Biswas

Amit Biswas

West Bengal, India
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