(95) Nothing Much To Say Poem by David S Dennis

(95) Nothing Much To Say

Rating: 2.7


I see you growing bitter
And I watch you finding fault
And I hear your declarations
Of how put upon you are
You recoil when I touch you
Then pretend there’s nothing wrong
But there is, and I can’t bear it,
But I lamely play along.

Every little alienation
Every thoughtless little dig
Has me moving further from you
Bit by stolid bit

To think that I once loved you
Seems Incredible from here
But I did and I remember it
As if it were a dream

Once the void between us
Was clouded and obscure
Now the cloud has vanished
And it’s absolutely clear
I can still see you, just
So far, so far away
And I’m talking to myself
With nothing much to say.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Donna Nimmo 23 November 2006

Nice poem, I've been there before. I like your poems. Sincerely Donna

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Jerry Hughes 04 November 2006

Nice flow mate, well done...

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Linda Ori 04 November 2006

David - I like your style! Nice rhyming, nice flow. Powerful read. Linda

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