953. spring Flowers - My Mother’s Smile In Multifold 140208 Poem by Raman Savithiri

953. spring Flowers - My Mother’s Smile In Multifold 140208

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Last summer you all departed
Fading to see the fuming sun.
All of you were not seen around
Until merciless autumn was over.
Where were you hidden in lifeless soil,
When winter wind blew to freeze desert?
Amusing spring is getting you back
To redecorate the barren expanse!

One by one your faces opening to twinkle
Here and there like twilight stars!
In mid spring you all will fill till horizon
This arid land like countless midnight stars! !
You all make me smile with your radiant smile
Filling heart with peace and contentment
Bringing a heaven down to earth! ! !

You all remind Mother’s smile in multifold,
Her unseen heart under even scorching sand,
Her fragrance carried along with dusty wind,
Her darshan once in a year with cuddling hand!
I wish this blissful spring should not leave
But hot summer and bitter winter weave
Crucial time to add splendour to spring
And to mould the soil and scenery for your being! 140208

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 17 February 2008

Nature plays its part systematically whereas man is anti-nature and behaves unsystematically. Yet, it is mother's natire to love her children, good or bad. A good is born from Savithiri's pen.

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rajagopal h 14 February 2008

wonderful poem from your pen; i had the hunch that you can write wonderful Nature poem; this is a proof; sequence and expansions are very well done... when i was listening to FM Radio yesterday one mother shared that ' Valentine Day ' is not for lovers only; it could be for mother child also; that mother is right; what a Valentine day presentation to ' Maa'......great poem....love this piece...keep giving similar feasts....

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Raman Savithiri

Raman Savithiri

Coimbatore, Tamil Nadu, India
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