♥ B Coreena ♥ Poem by Coreena Dejesus

♥ B Coreena ♥

Rating: 4.8


My friends call my Coreena that's my name!
Sweet and innocent I proclaim!
I'm a taurus stubborn as can be!
Meet me and at first you'll agree!

Raised in the Michigan outside Detroit City.
I'll be known to show you up, I'm very witty.
I may be a military girl but quite a rule breaker,
Just can't get introuble for being a risk taker.

See me and I'll smile but don't be fooled,
My Ex will tell you my reputation was over-ruled.
I laugh, I joke, but my skin isn't always thick,
Raised a tom boy, but I'm still a chick.


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alfredo Jacques 28 October 2007

beutiful poem great ending.

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Thad Wilk 04 November 2007

Coreena! Really nice poem, keep inking them! ! (10) ! Thad

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Chris Mendros 19 December 2007

This one is cool, whimsical but ballsy, a stubborn bull, but 'still a chick.'

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Vidyadhar ... 05 March 2008

good poem with rhymes and musical.liked it 10

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Meggie Gultiano 10 March 2008

a nice poem, my dear..sexy and beautiful

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Duncan Wyllie 18 July 2009

Tom -boy? ? May-be, , but you still have an innocense about the way that you write and Coreena is a beautiful name Love duncan X

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Anjali Sinha 14 July 2009

hey I must say your very cute your biography nicely done as poem -10 anjali

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Patrick A. Martin 13 July 2009

Great start I know who I'm dealing with before I read on - looks like fun ahead

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Maxislam Beauty 10 November 2008

this is like a rhyme but it sounds so real. maxim

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David Desantis 03 April 2008

Hahah i really liked that one. Clever and different than all the rest i've read on here. You sound like a good time. I'm new to this, but that was one of the better ones i've checked out. -david

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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