Treasure Island

hannah baquiran

♥ Love Promise♥

THe first time I saw you,
I became instantly mesmerized by you..
I would like to think that you were a
god in a simple polo shirt...
For how many years in my life past,
I've never seen such a lovely sight....

Then I saw you again at the restaurant...
I didn't want to think that what
was happening to me is another case of
what they call 'love-at-first-sight'....

I just want to believe that
I'm just so attracted to you...
Even if I'm sleeping your faces
is still haunting me in my dreams....

I was struck by a thunderbolt
when I first saw you...
And I will never let you go..,
I'll promise you that....

Submitted: Monday, February 09, 2009

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  • Her Name Is Taylor (2/9/2009 5:23:00 PM)

    You are my age! ! ! I really like the poem, Love at first sight, sweet and cute, nice poem
    a good tribute to Valentine's Day! (mine was a lot sadder) my poem was called Cupid Aimed, but Missed..... it's about the opposite of yours, if yu wana read it click on mi page, nice poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

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