Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(a) 12 (Love/Passion) As Real As... - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

As real as air, earth and water
As real as a lovers fight
As real as teh laughter
Of a child in delight....

As real as the expanse of the sea
As real what lurks underneath
As real as the lovers glee
Of an unexpected rendevous....

Come and touch my heart
And make me real
Gaze into the depth of my soul
Make it sublime and surreal....


Comments about (a) 12 (Love/Passion) As Real As... by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

  • Rookie Preeti - is here! (5/30/2007 5:47:00 AM)

    apart from the one typo 'teh' which should read 'the'..the poem is flawless and amazing! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 39 Points Patricia Gale (1/18/2007 4:53:00 AM)

    Passionate and longing piece.
    I can imagine this piece being sited to a lover before the moment of true desire and love meet.... well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Geoff Warden (1/17/2007 10:52:00 PM)

    And on that find read..................hmhmhmhmhmhmhm...........TENsion mounting.............well done T>O> (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 48,977 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (1/17/2007 10:52:00 PM)

    TELL YA WHATS REAL.....YOUR WORK & THE EFFORT THAT OBVIOUSLY GOES INTO ITS MAKINGS.....SOLID WRITE, T.O.
    F. j. R. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 17, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, December 27, 2010


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