Treasure Island

Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(A) 12 (LOVE/PASSION) AS REAL AS...


As real as air, earth and water
As real as a lovers fight
As real as teh laughter
Of a child in delight....

As real as the expanse of the sea
As real what lurks underneath
As real as the lovers glee
Of an unexpected rendevous....

Come and touch my heart
And make me real
Gaze into the depth of my soul
Make it sublime and surreal....

Submitted: Wednesday, January 17, 2007
Edited: Monday, December 27, 2010

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  • Patricia Gale (1/18/2007 4:53:00 AM)

    Passionate and longing piece.
    I can imagine this piece being sited to a lover before the moment of true desire and love meet.... well done! (Report) Reply

  • Geoff Warden (1/17/2007 10:52:00 PM)

    And on that find read..................hmhmhmhmhmhmhm...........TENsion mounting.............well done T>O> (Report) Reply

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