A 15 Year Old's Pain Poem by destiny tatum

Ah...I remember the pain of being 15 like it was yesterday. I don't know if this is a poem from your heart because you are going through this now. Or, if it is just a poem expressing something in your past. But, if you are going through it now, I can assure you...life does get better. As for the structure of your poem, I like your unique spelling of words such as 'tryen'. And, I think you expressed the emotion very well. I want to encourage you to keep on writing. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

i love this! its perfectly described... mm... man, i know how you feel. ur good! (=

i know exactly how u feel! ! i went through this just last year......i still do at times.... well written! !

hunny, im 14, i think that was an amazing poem. but, how can i say it? im a christian and i am comfortable with myself. you just need to be comfortable and have faith in YOURSELF you are an amazing person, there is no one in this world as unique and wonderful as YOU dont try to be someone you arent. there isnt a parfect picture of beauty in this world, not 'a look' that you need to look like. be yourself. if you read my poems you will understand what i am saying.

girly girl girl, you wrote a 15 year old's pain flawlessly, loved it and i can empathize greatly...im 15 trying to find, my way beautiful

Being 15 is when you get your first taste of how strange and alien the world actually is as contrasted with how organized and socially conscious it presents itself to be. That won't go away. It's a long and very lonely journey but in the end you will be able to look in the mirror and see a similar image, only a bit older, that's not worth hating anymore when loving it is just that much easier on the heart.