(a) 3 (Love/Passion) Heres To Us Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 3 (Love/Passion) Heres To Us

Rating: 3.2


Lets drink the wine of love...
Swirl it and soak it in...
Smell the fragrance
Mmm...and the scent of heaven

A song in our hearts
Smile in the eyes
Love to keep us fulfilled
For the rest of our lives...

Soar out to our dreams
Swim out from the streams
To join the ocean of love
And discover...
The world of paradise.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 25 March 2007

A lovely write, thankyou T, O. wonderful, Love duncan X

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Geoff Warden 17 February 2007

Well done T.O. this piece flows so well and is delivered with the passion of purity

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 February 2007

A beautifuly crafted Poem, T.O....COMPLIMENTED BY ELOQUENT, POETIC ELOCUTION....fINE WORK, AS CAN ALWAYS BE EXPECTED BY YOU... f.j.r.

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Patricia Gale 17 February 2007

Beautiful, such love portrayed... well done.

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Declan McHenry 17 February 2007

A lovely piece indeed. Evocative. Ethereal.

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