(a) 44 (Love/Passion) Sleep Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 44 (Love/Passion) Sleep

Rating: 4.9


To remove all clothes
Wrap your thoughts around me
and sleep

To scrape my mind
Of all thoughts except you
and sleep

To close my eyes forever
since you are not in sight
and sleep

To drift off in an eternal dream
With you and you
and sleep

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 07 November 2006

Serene and peaceful, excellent writing Tranquil.----Melvina----

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Preeti - is here! 16 August 2006

Loved the style. Sleep on a bed of memories Sleep with his voice thats like a lullaby Sleep the sleep and be trasported to where you want to be! Preets

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Patricia Gale 16 August 2006

Lovely the peaceful dream of love.Wonderful read.

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Davency Leroy 15 August 2006

I love it...short and simple

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